Friday, April 2, 2010

Story Recommendation: March Out of the Madness by Twisted Minds Think Alike

Okay...I will admit right up front that I am probably more than a little biased about this going in. Not only do I obviously LOVE Emmett, but the two authors that make up Twisted Minds Think Alike, Jaspers Sex Kitten and MaitresseSaint,  are two of my favorite online people!


They have written a different kind of Emmett/Bella story. It does start with the "Edward left her and is cruel about it and the family follows", however, in the aftermath, Rosalie also leaves Emmett (not for or with Edward as far as I can tell) and Emmett is PISSED. This leads to an atypical dark and brooding Emmett. After some of Alice's patented visions, Emmett makes his way back to Forks to find an equally pissed and semi-violent Bella. Put two passionate and enraged creatures in the same room and what do you get?  Yeah, you guessed it...angry sex. And YES it's Bella's first time to Emmett's surprise!



He pushed me into the wall and I gasped as the pain hit me. I would definitely have bruises, but God he felt so good against me. He ran his hand around my waist and gripped my ass. I tried to wrap my legs around him, but he stopped me. He pulled the zipper of my jeans down and pulled them off. He pulled my legs up, resting them on his hips. He tugged on the bottom of my shirt and I lifted it over my head.



His hands ghosted over my abdomen and up to grip my breast. The sensation sent a shiver up my spine and a burn to my core. Emmett growled as he pressed his erection into my ass. I moaned as his mouth found their way to my breasts. His hand came around and ripped my panties off of my body. He slipped a finger into me while he assaulted my breast, licking and biting my hard nipples. I moaned as he added a second finger inside of me.



"Emmett," I whimpered.



His pace sped up and I felt my muscles tighten. My chest was heaving, trying to catch enough air as I began to tremble. I screamed out his name as I came. There was no time to recuperate from that mind blowing sensation before he moved me to the arm chair I was occupying when he came in. He dropped me on my ass and grabbed my legs behind the knee, pulling me forward as he dropped to his knees.



"Bella, I will not hurt you," he stated as his tongue met my thigh and licked up towards my wet center.



I moaned as his tongue dove into me. The coolness of his tongue against my heated body was doing things to me I couldn't imagine. He again slipped his fingers in me. The pressure he used was painful but I couldn't stop him, I wanted it too bad. He bit down on my clit as he slammed his fingers in and out of me. "Bella, cum for me, now" he growled.



My body started to tighten....



"Em... God... I... yes...."



As I came down from my orgasm, Emmett pulled me up to his chest and kissed me. I wrapped my legs around his waist and pulled the zipper of his pants down. He quickly stepped out of them and his boxers. I could feel his cock pressing against my stomach, causing me to moan. He moved to the back of the arm chair, sitting me on the top, and leaning me back.



He lifted my legs, quickly resting them on his shoulders. I knew what was coming and I tried to relax, but as he slid into me I screamed his name. As he hit my barrier the pain and pleasure mixed and I was in heaven. A tear escaped my eye as he pounded into me. His grip on my waist was tight and it felt like he was going to rip right through me.



"Emmett," I whispered.



It's like he wasn't there. I shivered as the pain went through me. My muscles tightened as he moved my thighs from his shoulders, but I was helpless against his grip. He grasped my legs with his hands and spreading me open. I was completely exposed, completely open to him as he pounded into me. I screamed in pain as I came. I felt like I was on fire and heard him growl as he shot his seed deep inside me. I felt my juices and his, running down my legs as he placed me on my feet.



I turned away from him and felt ashamed. I just had sex, for the first time, with my ex-boyfriends, brother. What in the hell was I doing? I must have seemed too easy for him. He was an experience man and I was a lonely, abandoned little girl with no future. I fell onto my knees as the tears started. I don't know how long I cried before he lifted me up to his chest and kissed my forehead.



"Bella, I..." he trailed off with a sigh.



He carried me, cradled to his chest, still crying, up the steps to the bathroom. He sat me on the side of the tub and turned the water on. Filling the tub he slowly sat me down inside and left the room. 

Instant regret sets in for a moment and they both have to work through their own inner battles about the situation, but yes, Emmett immediately sees her as his mate. Bella takes a little more time to come around.

At the moment, this is one chapter as it was a contest entry. But I have it on good authority that it will be continued and I for one can not wait!!!  Way to go girls! Love ya!

1 comment:

  1. Thank you thank you thank you! We really wanted to do something different with Emmett and there aren't many dark fics with his character. <3 This was great and put a smile on my face.

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